Thursday, June 19, 2014

Interrogating A Sickle

What a devious curve
You carry. A burden?
I think not. You, batch of breath,
You shoulder it with mastery. And
Still you yank a trailing sack.
You are so versatile! A
Magicked many inhabit your arsenal.

Do you polish it often?
To make the sour swerve of it 
More proficient? Do you
Let it fester? Let it ring with rust 
So it triumphs with more a tear
And a tug than a terminal trim? 

Do you drag in that crumpled bag
Your face, too?
Your comb-over, your
Strawberry scrubs, your mucus and
Glue? 
A priest, a parasite, a private bud
Born to unscrew. 

How do you come?
Some proud plume of smog.
Hooded, hunched like a parable.
Or do you don a cloak more
Chameleonic?
Blending to brothels, to brooding
Leftovers, to frothing water
Weighing down the prize. 
A perfect plundering. 

Do you smile? When you 
Do what you do and you see it
Through
Do you revel in it? 
How foolish, you're always veiled as
The victor.
But I once read in a fat book that you
Let one slip through. The fat book
That leeched, preached on my
Soul for a decade, until it had
Shriveled it down
To a crooked cashew.
Still fragrant enough to attract you. 

Do you wince after every fake rising?
A pillow pristine, sheets solid with
Formaldehyde.
Do not look so shocked! So 
Typically abysmal!

I know you are sleepless.
Your head heavy with one eye active
For every two.
They say repent, repent
For seconds ill-spent but they haven't a clue.

I know you are sleepless.
Omniscient monarch, clutching
Both sun and moon.
I know your lips are tasteless, 
Your heels are beat-less.
No rest, we fragile crops need
Tending to.

© 2014 BENJAMIN SMITH 

12 comments:

  1. Wow .... my favorite stanza:

    Do you polish it often?
    To make the sour swerve of it
    More proficient? Do you
    Let it fester? Let it ring with rust
    So it triumphs with more a tear
    And a tug than a terminal trim?


    the imagery of the tug, the tearing -- more than a trimming. this entire poem is powerful and needs several reads to fully grasp it -- all I can say is "WOW"

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    1. I am so grateful for your comments on the poem. Thank you so much for taking the time to read it, once or multiple times. Regardless, it is a blessing in itself to have one's work be viewed and simultaneously appreciated.

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  2. This reads very nicely... certainly wouldn't mind hearing this one read aloud.
    The imagery is solid; through all that seems to be random, a clear picture was painted. Nice work.

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    1. I will record a reading in the near future and post it or message it to you.

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  3. great titling...and i like the probing verse....the questioning...and nice turn of phrase in we fragile crops...

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    1. I was a bit hesitant about the title at first, but it was the only one that seemed to fit properly. Thank you, Brian.

      -Ben

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  4. An amazing and wonderful poem! I love the way you address and interrogate "him", and the apparently unafraid tone. I admire the rhyming, internal and otherwise.

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    1. Thank you so much, Rosemary! I'm glad that you noticed the enormity of the significance of the tone. I appreciate your feedback!

      -Ben

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  5. Hail the poet! THIS is fearless from start to finish of what is feared, spurned, spleened and believed. Wow.

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  6. The repetition of repent repent brought forth an image of a mad preacher...

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